Hi! I managed to optimize my time to get everywhere I decided that this comic appears every two weeks, so the quality is not affected because I also work. and I can't avoid it... Jareth keeps me prisoner
De verdad que la madrastra es insoportable pobre Sarah
y las correcciones * "How many have already lost?" bueno, aca tenemos omisión del sujeto SHE y erróneo el uso del "HAVE" que sería "HAS" o sea quedaría sí: "How many has she already lost?" en la misma bubble "is a spoiled child" le falta el "SHE" y le agregaría SUCH A: She's such a spoiled child", sigo en la misma "She believes that lfe is like a fairytale" le sacaría THAT "she believes life is like a fairytale, She belives that there is a perfect man and he will come to re rescue" yo lo arrglaría así (para hacerla corta) "She THINKS there's a perfect man WHO will come to the rescue" (sacamos a belive por think, ya que sino es muy repetitivo, y ponemos un WHO en vez de un AND, queda mejor ) * "They must think that fidelity is synonimous with stupidity" yo pondría esto "Men must think that fidelity is a synonimous of stupidity" (THEY no tiene antecedente en ningun lado, por lo que sería bueno poner quienes son esos THEY (men). "The problem will be mine?" otra vez, hay que usar inversión del auxiliar... por cierto que WILL no es lo que usaría, sino "IS" quedaría "is it my problem?" o "Am I the one with a problem?" lo que más te guste * "Did I ask too much" le falta el FOR "Did I ask for too much?" y aca "I only ask to be the only one in their lives!" no está mal, pero repetimos ASK y ONLY, y no fluye muy bien, yo pondría "I just wish to be the only one in their lives!" El resto está bien!
The thing is, you cannot expect to be "the only one in their lives". Fidelity, yes, of course, but some of my friends tend to extend the concept too much. Meaning they even expect their boy/girlfriend not to have any kind of a close relationship with someone of the other sex : they just think that the concept of best friends is THE way to infidelity
oh, yes, I have friends who think so. once asked a girl why one can not have male friends, and she replied, "because at some point, one of the two confused." I do not know if this rule is so strict. I did not fall in love with all my male friends.
Last time a good friend of mine and I went together in a merry-go-round, and he refused to have any pictures of us taken because "if his girlfriend sees them on facebook she's gonna dump him". Fucking twisted logic...
Oh, C'mon! Do you not hear the news? in the world there are more women than men.find one that is more difficult! lol. now, seriously. people who seek only external beauty are not reliable.because beauty is lost with age. personality, no. Look who fall in love with your personality. these are long lasting.